Still not sure which way to go with this story, at one point I thought of doing it with washes like my ‘revenge’ story but it didn’t feel right somehow…because it’s a ’sci-fi story, I’m thinking of going digital, here’s my first attempt at pg 1.  I’m having a hard time putting down what I see in my head…

One thing for sure is that I’m going to re-draw panel 3 and make it more dynamic…